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Sunday, September 18, 2011

Six Sentence Sunday



Sara loved Connor, but he was from the wrong side of the tracks. They eloped and her father had him mudered or so she thought. Pregnant and desperate to escape an arranged marriage Sara married Connor's best friend, Aaron. When Connor returns very much alive, Sara is forced to choose between her first love and the new love she's found.

For this week I thought I'd share a snippet from my contemporary romance Till Death Do Us Part available in both ebook and print from Amira Press.


Sara shook her head. She didn’t want Aaron to stay with her. She wanted to be alone. She wanted to just fall into the darkness and never ever come out because the light just hurt too much. Maybe she could just stay here forever. She could lie down on the bed and just wait to die, to join Connor.



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12 comments:

melissamackinnon said...

A good six! I love the part about falling into the darkness. Great imagery!

E. Jamie said...

Thanks Melissa!

Piper said...

Awesome six! I can feel Sara's depair.

Gem Sivad said...

Yes, I feel her anguish. Very evocative six.

E. Jamie said...

@Piper Thanks!

@Gem I'm glad that came through!

Cara Bristol said...

Sad six. What a set-up though -- quite the dilemma.

Jean said...

Powerful six. I feel her despair. Well done!

Pablo Michaels said...

I've been in her position when Connor returns and she has to chose. Great six.

SJ said...

Poignant six! I can feel her pain.

Great job!

SammyJo

E. Jamie said...

@Cara Thanks!

@Jean Thanks very much!

@Pablo A hellish dilema for sure

@Sammy Jo Thankie muchly!

1000th.monkey said...

Ahhh... depression. Very nicely written :) I like how she doesn't want Aaron beside her, nice way to show her withdrawing from comfort

E. Jamie said...

Thanks very much!