Saturday, February 11, 2012

Six Sentence Sunday

For the next Six Sentence Sundays until its release with No Boundaries Press I will be sharing as of yet unedited snippets from the first book in my upcoming Blood Vows Trilogy called The Vendetta, a contemporary erotic romance about rival mafia families.

Our hero and heroine have just met via a road collision and neither know who the other is at this point. Hope you enjoy!

“I’m going to try and cut you free.” Bree worked furiously, trying not to pay attention to the flames above her getting bigger and warming her face.

“ ‘side down?” he asked, groggily registering his position.

“Yeah. This would be a good time for a ‘dropped on your head’ joke.” She slid her legs in through the window, trying to give him something soft to land on if he couldn’t brace himself.

“Think you can hold on?” Bree asked him as she made good progress on the seatbelt.


Lisa Fox said...

Wow, intense! She's doing a good job of saving him.

sue said...

great detail - oh boy wait til they find out lol

Tmonique Stephens said...

Nice description and great website.

The AfterDark World with Ray Sostre said...

Hell yeah, great work! Good luck on your release.

Liz said...

wow! incredibly descriptive. can't wait to read this!

Sarah Ballance said...

What an awesome way for them to meet! This sounds like it's going to be so good. I love your voice SO much - your writing always puts me right in the story. ;c)

Sandra Sookoo said...

Nice urgency in your snippet :-)

Kate said...

Sounds like she's a non-nonsense kind of gal. Love how she's seeing the funny side amidst all that danger, too. Great six.

Jessica Subject said...

Wow, I can really feel the intense atmosphere of this scene. Excellent six! :)

Angela Quarles said...

Great 6! I also love that it sounds like he's going to fall face first into her lap :)

E. Jamie said...

@Lisa Thanks! No shrinking violet is our Brianna!

@Sue That will definitely be something! (laughs)

@Tmonique Thanks!

@Ray Thanks very much!

@Liz Thankie muchly!

@Sarah (blushes) Thanks for the wonderful compliment. The feeling is SO mutual!

@Sandra Thankie kindly!

@Kate That definitely describes Bree!

@Jessica Thanks very much!

@Angela Pretty much! (giggles)

Sadie Hart said...

Wow, that's one heck of a way to meet. Love Bree already, calm and focused under pressure, but still with a sense of humor. Can't wait to read more and congrats on your upcoming release!