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Saturday, February 18, 2012

Six Sentence Sunday

Another sneak peek this week from the first book in my upcoming Blood Vows trilogy 'The Vendetta' coming soon from No Boundaries Press! In this snippet, we meet Alessandro. Hope you enjoy!

When he rounded the long thick white beam in the center of the room his heart felt as if it had stopped in his chest. Her head was tilted to the side, resting against the pillar and her face was flushed in sleep. Good God, she was the most beautiful thing he’d ever seen. For a moment Alessandro couldn’t breathe. He just stood there and watched her, watched her chest rising and falling with each breath. This slip of a girl had pulled him from his car and all but carried him to safety?

10 comments:

Lisa Fox said...

Sounds like more is going on here than meets the eye!

A.S. Fenichel said...

Ooh, I like this six. So nice to be inside the hero's head, and he sounds like a good one. Great job!

Cara Bristol said...

Nice hook! I like the way he looks at her.

Denny S. Bryce said...

Great six.

Dakota Trace said...

Masterful storytelling. I love the description and can actually see this...the emotion is spot on too.

Sarah Ballance said...

Oh, this is so good! I really, really love how he sees her. It makes me all mushy inside. ;c)

Cynthia Arsuaga said...

Nice 6, very descriptive.

E. Jamie said...

@Lisa Oh definitely!

@A.S Thanks very much! He's definitely a good man...deep down. (evil grin)

@Cara Thankie muchly!

@Denny Thankie kindly!

@Dakota (blushes) Thanks for the wonderful compliment!

@Sarah Alessandro is definitely a 'mushy inside' inducing kind of hero. (smiles) The power of his love for this woman will be off the charts!

@Cynthia Glad you enjoyed it!

Elaine Cantrell said...

She sounds like something else!

Alix Cameron said...

Great work!