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Sunday, July 10, 2011

Six Sentence Sunday

I've signed up with many awesome authors at www.sixsunday.com and we're all posting snippets of our wip's! Here's a tiny bit from my wip Sweet Revenge. Hope you enjoy!

Neither of them spoke. Eric's eyes just moved over her as if seeing her for the first time. The evidence of his arousal surged thick between them even through his layers of clothing and Dara fought with every ounce of willpower she possessed not to press her hips down, not to give in to this hungry, monsterous thing between them. All the while her pulse beat a strong rhythm through her blood that told her he knows! He knows how I feel and he feels the same way. God help them both.

16 comments:

Sam Crescent said...

Excellent six. I loved reading them and look forward to more

E. Jamie said...

Thanks very much!

Sara Thacker said...

Great Six!!!

E. Jamie said...

So glad you liked it, Sara! These are a lot of fun to do. I'm definitely signing up for next week too.

Jessica K said...

Nicely done, sweeps the reader away!

E. Jamie said...

Thanks very much Jessica!

Sandy Nachlinger said...

Terrific description. I like the internal dialogue too.
Note: You might want to remove one set of echoed words that are kind of close together: between them. Hope you don't mind the nitpicking!

kerriannecoombes said...

It was a really nice six - very good. Athough i must confess that i had a little trouble reading it because the background and the text were the same colour in parts. I had to scroll to be able to see all of the words... Sorry to say, but i thought you might like to know xx

E. Jamie said...

@Sandy Thanks very much! No worries at all since this is a first draft so I welcome any suggestions.

@kerriann Glad you enjoyed it. Yeah, I know the text might need a bit of scrolling here and there but I just love that background so. (laughs)

Sandra Sookoo said...

Ooh, very steamy! Welcome to SSS! You'll love it here!

E. Jamie said...

Thanks Sandra! I so am!

Ranae Rose said...

Sexy six!

Lindsay said...

Welcome to SSS. That's a steamy six.

E. Jamie said...

@Ranea Thanks so much!

@Lindsay Glad you enjoyed it! I'm loving reading everybody else's SSS so far. Gonna take me a couple of days to get through them though! (laughs)

ursulawhistler.com said...

Oooo, hungry and monstrous. Good six.

E. Jamie said...

Thanks very much! I'm hoping to have the new snippet up in an itty bitty!