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Sunday, July 24, 2011

Six Sentence Sunday

Thanks so much to everyone who has read my snippets thus far and commented! So glad you guys are enjoying them!

For this week's snippet from my wip Wanted, an erotic historical romance set just after the civil war, we get Colin and Mara's first kiss! Hope you enjoy!

He groaned, a primal sound of possession Mara had never heard as his mouth finally closed over hers in a devastating kiss that shook the very earth beneath her. Lost, she grabbed at his shoulders, fearing she would spin off into the world as her senses left her so completely she'd be hard pressed to remember her very own name at the moment. No, he was most definitely not like the French men...boys, she amended, with who she had flirted. None of them had kissed her like this. His mouth moved over hers, opened hers, demanded entrance and when his tongue slid inside Mara whimpered at the delicious, sinful invasion. She followed his lead, kissing him back the way he showed her.


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14 comments:

ursulawhistler.com said...

Oooo, not like the boys, hey? Good job.

JoAnne Kenrick said...

sounds like his kisses pack one heck of a punch! fab six xx

E. Jamie said...

@ursula Mara's definitely not used to someone like Colin. (smiles)

@JoAnne You bet! Colin doesn't play around. (laughs)

Bree said...

Sexy six! Yummy!

E. Jamie said...

Thanks Bree!

Robin_Badillo said...

I;d whimper, too! LOL! Yum!

E. Jamie said...

(laughs) Thanks Robin!

Sam Crescent said...

Excellent six. I loved reading them.

1000th.monkey said...

Very... visceral :)

...one small thing, I find it rather difficult to read your blog because the background image is such a dark colour, the words often get lost...

Lorien Velez said...

Steamy kiss! Definitely a satisfying scene. :)

Lindsay said...

That kiss sounds like a toe curler. Great job

E. Jamie said...

@Sam Yep, you comment showed up this time! (huggies)

@1000thMonkey Thanks very much. Yep, I guess I'm gonna have to change it.

@Lorien So glad you enjoyed it!

@Lindsay Definitely what I was going for!

Benjamin Tiberius Russell said...

A good kiss can spark a raging fire of desire or if done poorly, without feeling it can douse the flames of passion. You have described a kiss that could start a forest fire. Well done.

E. Jamie said...

Thanks Benjamin!!!